Wow! I literally help my breath the whole way through reading this....that was intense! My favorite line was: "The ocean floor came into focus like a slowly developing photograph. First the outlines, then the color, then the life." I love your descriptions so much, they really put the reader, right in there next to you. I wonder what Jack is up to these days?
The only reason I didn’t totally freak out as I read this is we’ve been together since this happened, so I know you survived!
Haha! But you don’t know what happens to Liv!
Wow! I literally help my breath the whole way through reading this....that was intense! My favorite line was: "The ocean floor came into focus like a slowly developing photograph. First the outlines, then the color, then the life." I love your descriptions so much, they really put the reader, right in there next to you. I wonder what Jack is up to these days?
Thank you. I’m glad the descriptions are working. And I’m sure Jack is living his best life.